Good, but has its flaws.
Overall this showed some real talent, but lacked heart (I wish there were a less corny way for me to say that, but I don't know of any).
I think you'll get a lot of criticism for a lack of dialouge, but it's not the lack of dialouge that's at fault, but the way it's implemented. IF your characters can't talk, they have to convey their feeling some other way. Their faces and movements weren't animated enough to flesh out them out.
Also, do to the setting, I had trouble seeing the characters (especially the polar bear). White on white didn't really rock my world.
I don't get the crab. What was his purpose?
Thanks for a quality submission.
Not to shabby.
Chilly Willy finally gets what is coming to his lil' tuxedoed @ss. Nice premise good length. I agree with the reviewer below, however alaskan king crabs (bluish green, not red) do live in the arctic circle. Cheers... Penguins do not lol.
Could be better.
Good that you have background songs,though it would've been more interesting if the penguins actually talked,you could've thrown some jokes in,it's just not very funny,no original humor.Animation is smooth though you could've created more natural movements.The graphics could've been better.I don't know why you didn't use flash,but this movie isn't very impressive.It has a decent length,but the problem is that the plot unfolds too slow,could've made the story longer,since in a more fast unfolding movie the time it would take to tell the same story you do would take about 15-25 seconds depending on the flash.Average.
Thanks for your descriptive critique.
The story really wasn't great, a downfall on my behalf.
I didn't use Flash because the program I'm using is capable of certain technics I'm comfortable with.
All in all, I've taken your comments to my attention and will consider them when I'll work on another project. Cheers!
Penguins don't live at the North Pole!
But for a movie not made in flash, it was pretty good.
Yeah, now I know that lol. I was asking a friend whether crabs do, he told me that they don't and neither do penguins. :(
Wasn't expecting that...