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i've done something similar
this isn't your own work, i've read MAR, and all the chapters that are out of MAR Omega, the flash is very simple, and i like how you cut up the pages so that they're readable.
constructive critisism time! let the reader know that it's read right to left and also make it scrollable using the arrow keys, also maybe a little ambient music in the background too, but nothing distracting
i never said it was my work. and next time i'll add music.
this is good
but if it was animated or interactive or something it would be perfect for newgrounds really but this should be on deviantart or something
did you draw all this yourself?
it's pretty good full of humour and leaves you wanting more
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
A Mystery Noir Series... Episode 6: Detective Swift confronts The Big Bad Wolf
Goofy dies. Sora cries.
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