XD You into beastiality baby?
Author Comments
This is my first real flash movie and I am teaching myself as I go. That is, I've done other movies, but nothing like this. If anyone has any tips as to how to make it look better, please tell me. I was too lazy to make the characters legs move when they walk, but you get the idea. There are other episodes in the works, so by then I can correct it, hopefully. It's been about two months of drawing and animating so I hope you like it.
a great start to the series :)
That guy playing the barbarian had a sexy voice!!!
I'm excited to see where these three misfits end up! Keep us posted on what's happening next!!!
PS-I think the barbarian should get more face time, but that's just me...
Pretty Damn good for a 1st!
A lot of first flash movies I have seen have been, well... poo. I've seen entrances to flash movies, but no movie, I've seen things that don't make sense. In your movie, none of that is a problem. You've got a cool entrance that introduces your characters (keep this idea for other episodes you may make-it looks good), you have a plot-which I assume is finding a job which probably involves violence (hence the Mercenaries), you've got intro music which cuts off at the movie and is replaced by voice, and you have mild dirty comedy.
I love the spitting scene-cool
Suggestions:
You said you wanted advice, so I'm going to help you with walking. Cut their legs diagonally and add some color to the hips and then group the color on. The left leg and right leg should become separate layers. A quick way to edit your characters is with the undo button-on a mac command Z, and on a pc control Z. You should add some facial expressions to your characters when they talk.
Congrats, you made my fav's. You're a good example for a First Flash Movie.
GJ 8/10.
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That good art and that bad animation?
90% Coppied :/ ....
Story = None (Thumbs Down)
Walk = EPIC FAIL
Sound = FAIL