It's ok. I chuckled at the end but for some reason the flash went really slow for a few seconds as you were zooming out. Not sure if that's me but whatever. I had an idea like this when I was just starting flash but scratched because it sucked. This didn't suck so much but it could be better... and seeing as this is your first drawn animation, it's not bad.
"Oh crap, you have talent."
You just need to work a little harder, come up with a better script, a longer animation, and record a little better; I could hear some fuzzy moments every now and then.
it was so bad my internet crashed. practice a little more(Read:a lot)
the flash was not flowing sow well and it stopped fore some seconds in the midle , and the sound was horrible but it was a good idea for a flash, and i like that you don`t submit sprites because personaly i hate those movies
The voice was good quality, and I enjoyed the metaphysical aspect of the flash. I simply suggest that you keep practicing making animations to improve your overall skill.