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Cosmic Cafe Commercial

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Hi Newgrounds!!!!! i'm new to the flash animation world and came here to learn more about flash animation from none other than the awsome pros seen here! This flash is my second flash animation that i've evar done. It's a comercial i had to make in my computer graphics class for a Cafe designing project. My Cafe was named Cosmic Cafe. I'm going to be working more on my flash techniques and trying to learn alot more about actionscript and what not so if anyone has any positive insight on flash to tell me, i'm all ears! Well thank you again and i hope you enjoy my very first Newgrounds Subbmission!

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good work

for your second work the animation is great :D
i like'd that you play a little bit with the camera but don't forget the audio, is very important if you want to put some feeling on the animation ;)
very nice work
keep working hard so we can see more of you in the near future :D

Really good for a 2nd timer

I am just starting to learn flash too, though I have not submitted anything yet. This looks really good- pretty smooth animation, artwork is great. You should jazz up the star a little with a shine or glitter or something. Way to go!

LenLen55 responds:

wow thank you! =D i was kinda in a rush to finish this for my class project! it took me about two days to storyboard the idea and then about two weeks to animate it. i'm going to fix it up a bit when i get the chance and add sounds and music so please keep an eye out for that! And thank you very much for your suggestions! ^^ i know these feedbacks will help me become a better animator!

wow.

its really good for 2nd flash. only thing missing is the loader. keep up the work.

LenLen55 responds:

Thank you! but what is a 'loader'? ^^;;;

It was cute.

Animations were nice, but why were you stuck with red lines as "gasp" signs?

pretty good

only one problem..yeah you guesed it..no sound :/

LenLen55 responds:

yes! i haven't been able to add the right song suited for this flash yet! ^^;;; i kinda wanted to put up just my latest work because i didn't want to have an empty account! but i'll be sure to add sound very soon! Thank you for your feedback! =D

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Uploaded
May 30, 2009
1:28 AM EDT