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May 28, 2009 | 5:33 PM EDT

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It is the neverending story of little mouse called Airin (My real rat i love her). She is lost and she is going in a snowing follow one's nose and searching new home. This is a relax movie, but who knows, maybe Airin is character for a new game. Just relax



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

All I can really say about this submission is that the great animation and graphics really boosted it's score and rating. It's really the only great thing about the submission. You can draw pretty good and the animation was smooth.

I wouldn't have mind seeing it do a couple of different things though. It took the same amount of steps, stopped, looked up, etc.. The same every time as it looped. I think perhaps having it walk a different distance, move differently, etc.. every time would make it a bit more interesting. Perhaps about three variants so by the time it repeats again it's not so boring seeing the same thing over and over.

~ Story/Content ~

Hm, I guess it was sort of relaxing. Perhaps it's not something I enjoy relaxing to. :P Perhaps you could have drawn out about 5 or so different backgrounds and gave people the choice of which background they wanted to choose.

Perhaps a dirty sewer, the park at night time, inside of a house, etc.. Some basic things like that. I think you could do a pretty good job since it looks like you can draw pretty good.

~ Audio ~

Not a bad song at all. Not really any room for improvements here since there wouldn't be any reason for a voice or sound effects.

~ Overall ~

Not bad. I wouldn't mind seeing the choice of other options as backgrounds.

Chroust responds:

Thank you, that isn´t bad idea. I try make my work better with different backgrounds,


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

nothing much

good graphics
nice sound

not much
nothing happens

this is pretty cool, but this is more of an animated .GIF, not really a flash.

Chroust responds:

Thank you for yours comments. This is my idea, but nothing isn´t perfectly. In a real, this movie is present for my ex-girl. She has like a rats as I. Body limbs - that is very intricately, I have trying my real Airin to gone, but she ever been too fast.. Thank you to all


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


It was quite calming with the music, and the rat is pretty cute, but I wish the body/limbs were less distinguishable from each other. Pretty nice on the loop, and was interesting for a bit, and I love the snowflakes :) The music could however play through better when restarting.

Chroust responds:

Ok, i try it make music better and limbs realistically.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


I like the smooth graphics you have used, but it's just a very short loop with some audio. If you created a full movie using this same amount of graphical quality and clear audio, there is a strong chance I would greatly enjoy it.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


There was nothing to it really, just a short loops. But it brought tears to my eyes ;_;