Nice little short.
Its pretty nice, i like the sound effects.
For a little short it's rather smooth as well.
Keep up the good work.
Perhaps we can see something a bit longer next time?
Thanks! Take a look at my other work. Am posting a new, six minute piece tomorrow. You will like.
Good work man.
Thank you. Short n sweet.
im sory but there are many ways you can improve. a good test but not worthy of being on the sight. as you said is's just to "pad my "repertoire". nect time try not to show some thing thats not exciting. because it wont be exciting! sorrry if this sounds harsh.
Not harsh at all, just harshly spelled. And your logic is impeccable!