Nice little short.
Its pretty nice, i like the sound effects.
For a little short it's rather smooth as well.
Keep up the good work.
Perhaps we can see something a bit longer next time?
Author Comments
Death just really isn't all that exciting. Here's a fellow demonstrating this simple fact.
DeweyGland responds:
Thanks! Take a look at my other work. Am posting a new, six minute piece tomorrow. You will like.
Heh
Pretty good.
Funny too.
Good work man.
DeweyGland responds:
Thank you. Short n sweet.
rubbish
im sory but there are many ways you can improve. a good test but not worthy of being on the sight. as you said is's just to "pad my "repertoire". nect time try not to show some thing thats not exciting. because it wont be exciting! sorrry if this sounds harsh.
DeweyGland responds:
Not harsh at all, just harshly spelled. And your logic is impeccable!
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- May 26, 2009
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- Comedy - Original