Not too bad

You should state somewhere the name of the music and the band sings it.
The concept is appealing, but I hope you improve the animation's style in future submissions.

nice really nice

i dear say that is front page stuff really i do

Ah storyboard style

Yes well what can I say. This movie was done in storyboard style.
Black and white the cool brush function from flash ;)
Reminds me of my own first endavour with flashmaker although you did a better job. Still it was sloppy and your preloader shows better what you are capable off ;)

So why on earth didnt you brush it up ? :D

It was alright.

You should try putting alot more detail into the animation. The sound quality was low aswell. If you put more effort and time into it it would have looked alot better. Apart form that it was ok.

Pretty good

The drawings: were pretty good, nothing to say about this really
the music: was aweful, didn't fit in this story
the story: was short, but ok. Could've gotten more out of it
the sound: wasn't there, so that was kinda disapointing

So overall you did good, although you could've done better with this.