Spring Break Day

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EDIT: Sorry I uploaded the UNFINISHED File Updated it. So now it has an ending

Animation that i made over spring break.
I wanted to finish this so i the ending is kinda rushed sorry folks :P


An interesting short.

I thought the voices you used for the characters were creative, it helped me identify their personalities. I liked how the boy was speaking similarly to Olde English, it made me laugh. The random arm grasping the phone and the caller made me laugh as well, you have a good sense of humor.

The animation could use some work in a few places, mainly at the end and when the guy was dancing. I thought the plot could have been a bit more elaborate, just so we could get some background information on the character. Some tweaking here and there should help your skills majorly improve.

I thought the music was very good, I chuckled at the Super Mario Brothers 3 theme and how his ringtone was Axel F. Overall, it was an entertaining flash. Good stuff right there, keep up the good work.

i liked it

i liked the sounds and lold when the phone came outa nower =]
also lold a bit when he punched the guy randomly
one problem is it should have had a better ending but overall pretty good

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3.83 / 5.00

May 22, 2009
6:21 PM EDT
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