needs better sound quality

needs better sound quality

Keep working at it.

The story was absolutely ridiculous. Making something random doesn't make it funny. The voice acting was alright. but lip synching was bad, to say the least. Go take a look around the site and note how other animators work. You'll pick up techniques if you pay real close attention. Practice what you learn.

You're well on your way, just keep working at it.

Not bad

Ehh, I giggled. I think the simplicity of the animation really suited the piece, though. Not bad for a time-killer piece.

Gasp!

Cake can cause so many problems, high cholesterol, diabetes... death... Y'know, it was pretty good, but too short, and the voices, I could barely hear them XD. Extend it a bit, make a sequel or something, make it a bit longer and add some more action and this has some potential to it :). Good job.

Well what's the point....

If there's no "THE CAKE IS A LIE!" joke at the end? Overall, nice little something, something for when you are bored. Mediocre at best. No offense.