READ THIS STUFF!! YOUR UNDERSTANDING DEPENDS ON IT!!
ERRK!! I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING!!
This will ONLY make sense if you watch the INTRO first! It's my only other submission, PLEEEASE watch first so that your brain doesn't melt into a puddle of confusion!! It's only about 320k and looks real crappy, but it makes things make sense.
Hi again, folks!
IMPORTANT ADDITION THINGY!!:::
Please submit this to the 'serious shorts' collection. I hope to get my own series later, but if not, I want my only child to be sorted SOMEWHERE!!
Here's the first part of 'Of Angels and Men: Episode 1'.
This bit contains mainly story and character development elements, whereas part 2 will contain an epic sword fight and not much else ;D
My skills have improved a tangible amount since I submitted the prologue, and I'm hoping for at least a 3 on this, but your opinion is your own. If you think it sucks, vote zero. It's what you think. Though, if you do vote low, please tell me what I could improve.
Since there aren't names hovering above the characters, I'll give them to you here.
The guy in the hat is known as Red; he's a feared assassin.
The guy with the cigar is known as Boss; he's the head of a huge and profitable mafia network.
The Angel who got shot down is named Kim. Or Kimberly, but she likes Kim more.