every single thing about that was totally cliche. you should just write for pokemon.
Slow pacing until the fight scene, which was exceptionally short compared to the overall flash. I enjoyed the character development and inter-character dynamic. Not bad.
I liked the animation style, and all of the drawings were nice.
Excellent female voice acting, it was just - nice to listen to.
The story was kind of intriguing, even though I didn't understand it at the beginning.
The action scenes were cool, but I'd love to see a bit more fluid movements and somewhat more action-ish sequences.
I'm looking forward to the next episode.
this is my favorite series on newgrounds.