nice inprovements

nice for the flash portal backround and the last level was much harder make llike some power ups and make it like outer space be creative if your work good job man keep it up

A few things...

well it was a good idea for the start with good music, but add motion, cutscenes, humor, a better background, and cooler story! Be the animator you are!!!!

it might be good but

well i would like the character to move like he was walking, but that is just a little thing also i would like it if the levels were more complex. i could see some improvements so yea just some suggestions that is all

Good begining.

The 3rd level exit doesn't work, and there's way more room for improvement. Try making enemies, powerups, longer levels ect.

Eh... No so much

New yes, but interesting no. The time limit is a pain, and it gets dull quite quickly. 3 outta 10