BLERGH

PISS

Haha funny

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good and funny animation you gave it that humor that makes you laugh, the "ART" was good aswell i wouldnt mind seeing more "ANIMATION" like with the limbs and such instead of cutting to a new scene but for what it is it was alright, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More limb animation and possibly some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Funny humor in this one, nice artwork aswell

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First one, you say?

This looks great for a first try, I like it. The drawings are clean and the characters have a nice design to them. However, the movements and animation are very rushed-looking, and the musicwas painfully bland and I had to turn the volume all the way up to understand what they were saying. But it looks to me like you're off on a good start, though!

If this is your first....

I can't wait to see what your future projects will be like. You already seem to have some distinctive aesthetics brewing, and your characters all appear very smooth. I've seen few first flashes this great. Keep on doin' 'em!