Short portal hopper themed flash. Gameplay was too slow, and it should be much faster. It ends too quickly. Add more levels and maybe a bonus level.

This was made on 5/19/09, and I am only the sixteenth person to review it.

lol

i won! fun game!!!!!!!!!!!

Awsome game

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was pretty good even for your first, you should add much more levels but the music was awsome stay with that tone and feel it gives it just the right feel, anyways nice game

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more levels and even more tricky ones

~~OVERALL~~
A tricky and fun game

~X~

Hmm

-its a bit short
- u might be added some walking, jumping animations maybe?
-drawing cute would make the whole game cute :D

not bad ;)

Well...

I can't really cut you to threads for this as it's your first attempt at a flash game. I will though, tell you the good points, which should also point out the bad points if you think hard enough, or read lower reviews. Hmm....The movement was pretty simple. Though, he could have been faster. Much faster, It wasn't hard to manuver, though I did get myself trapped on the first level, getting stuck between two close platforms. I loved the colors of the portals, but they would have been much better having been animated with a shimmering colored mist around them, pulling air in, but that's a bit much for a first timer, without alot of work. It needed more colors though. :P

Anyway, Yeah. Good first attempt. Try again, and spend some time thinking up an perfect game, then take your time making it. No need to rush on our account. ^-^