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narwhal game

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just a small game i had to make for college assignment, i know it's a load of crap but it was enough to hand in.

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Pretty nice game,but needs this things:

Main Menu Screen - Every game has a menu screen.A good thing to add for a main menu would be adding the features "How to play","High Scores","Options",and most importantly "Play".

Lives - Making you lose points when you collide with a iceberg isn't the way to go.A good thing would be that if you collide with a iceberg,you lose.You go to a menu that says the score you got,and the features "Retry" and "Main Menu".

You should get rid of negative scores.

More obstacles and point items - Adding more obstacles would spice up the game,since only icebergs don't make the thing.Also,fishes give you only a point,so adding another creatures that give you more points would be better.

Powerups would be good.

It needs BGM,and sounds for when you collide with a object or when you get a fish.

It also needs better graphics.

I hope this review helps you to improve.

nice

i did a little flash and its realy hard so congratz man. its not that great but ng needs more user generated material

Good

You did a good job on the effects but you needed maybe some different fish and action music

it is ok

I have to agree with Hikari12. The graphics are a bit bad and needs more work. There are no instructions or start screen pages so how was i supposed what to do. Furthermore you need to get rid of the negative scores e.g. -2

It's a good start.

I see where you're going with this. The graphics are good.

Scoring system has to be fixed (no negative scores).

BGM (BackGround Music)

Etc.

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Votes
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Score
2.33 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 18, 2009
12:32 PM EDT