Don't be so hard on yourself man; this was pretty damn good. The line at the end was great, by the way. :D
I just hope I can be better next time. XD
Glad you enjoyed the joke. ^^
this was alright
tbh the animation and sounds where actually quite good. but i think you dont give yourself enough credit. also i dont think you should be posting up paragraphs of how much you hate it, its kind of almost vouching. no offense. i think it was exactly what it was meant to be. an animated joke with a hilarious punchline. and if done any other way, i dont see it being any better. you did good man! be confident about your art. your better than a lot of people. me for instance. if your better than me but crap that means i am attrocious lol. make more! you obviously know what your doing!
:D:D:D take care and keep improving :D:D:D thanks
It's just that, I was supposed to be working to show my skill to my teacher. So as far as I knew. I couldn't possibly be proud of this animation. I know it can be better. So. The most I'll be getting out of this is a B. I'm not too happy about it. xD But thank you for the encouragement, it does mean a lot.
That was actually fun to watch, I can only wish it were longer.
The animation was impeccable and the voice for the fat baldy man was perfectly fitting.
Congrats on a great cartoon!
That voice is the result of having too much time playing with voice changing programs. xD
Next one, I promise, will be longer. Thank you very much for the comment. I'll do better next time.
I thought it was pretty good.
The animation was clean and smooth...and wouldn't we all like to give a good groin kick to a skuzz who says something rude and grabs our behind! Plus, your punchline made me laugh.
Ah, thank you. xD
I wish I could've worked a bit harder on it. At least the joke makes sense.
short, but i think it`S funny :D
Well, at least I achieved that much. xD