hmm

for you first flash ill give it a 7/10 because most people first flashes arent even good enough to make it on the portal.

Art: 4/10 it wasnt bad but also could have been alot better, with practice comes perfection. The character could for example have been more detailed as could the background.

animation:2/10 quite poor animation you used alot of motion tweens with basically little to no frame by frame. Although i liked the lighnign strike.

music: 10/10 the randomness of the music in this flash is what made it reasonably watchable, it went well with the strange concept.

Other comment: there are to many improvements that could be made to this flash to list, however for a first attempt it is very good. Dont forget the more effort you put into a project the more satisfaction you get out of it.

Decent

The sound quality is pretty poor. Animation skills are decent for a novice. No plot, old overused dull jokes. Also I believe you're supposed to give credit to the artists of the songs you used. Not 100% on that though, but even if you don't have to, you really should.

i must say...

worst walking animation i have ever experienced. that being said. i loled :)

meh

it was funny when he fell off the building and when he got hit by lightning

Well...

For a first time/project, this is good. But it's just a guy walking around, so I wouldn't say it really belongs on newgrounds. 5/10.
( But I do love the music choices. :D )