Awesome
This movie is amazing. The poor graphics really add to the humor.
Author Comments
A bad detective in a good world, Detective bacon takes the lead as a mentally retarded(AKA bad ass) detective in this thrilling and suspenseful movie! -David G.
Your mother. - Tom P.
DavidJG6 responds:
Yes it was.
Story Doesn't Flow
Crude art style, needs more sound effects, narrative runs too quickly throughout and the story isn't exactly brilliant.
DavidJG6 responds:
Were not the smartest with flash but thanks for the review :]
Too fast paced
The story flow isn't very good, hoping back and forth through events. There isn't really any explaination as to what exactly is supposed to be happening. The graphics are rather crude, which can be acceptable under certain conditions, but not here. I think if it progressed slower with more story, it could redeem itself from the poor art quality more than good art quality will redeem a bad story.
DavidJG6 responds:
Were trying again actually this time putting effort. The art took like 20 minutes, the story and stuff took around the same, but aminating it and adding sound, then trying to even make it a fluid and slow motion made it hard. I'll work longer with the art and story and maybe the 2nd one would actually be a decent flash :P
funny still!
i kinda liked it because i like short funnies like this one. you could do better with the graphics though. i bet youve done that in three hours or something. :D
DavidJG6 responds:
Actually it took a while, me and my friend both have almost 0 knowledge with flash but we figured we'd try to make a movie that is decent. I'm actually a pretty good artist but i cant draw with a mouse for crap, so the graphics had near 0 effort characters were done in like 5 minutes lol. This is our 100% first try, but i admit it was very lazily done, flash is more fustrating than we thought :(
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