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Awesome i have to say that this was enjoyable, the characters well done well and it had a fluent style to it which made it feel well presented, only problem would be the language which i couldn't understand, subtitles would help a lot.
Author Comments
well this is my first long animation, sorry its only in spanish.
i made it for my animation class not to long ago, im still learning to use flash, so i know its not really good hehe.
background music by: JohnDare here at newgrounds :3
cAtyviri responds:
thank you, i know that about the language, but i dont think i'll put subtitles =P
later proyects will have them though!!
thanks for the comment i really apreciate it =3
make an english version
~~REVIEW~~
this was actually pretty good animation was nice and smooth, voice was very clear, maybe make an english version though,
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add an english version and or make english subtitles
~~OVERALL~~
Good and smooth animation
~X~
cAtyviri responds:
thank you! i dont think i will make an english version of it, but i'll make new animations, now with subtitles haha, thanks for the comment :3!
Muy bueno para ser tu primero
He visto muchas primeras-animaciones mucho peores!
Estas aprendiendo, pero la neta vas por muy buen camino... La animacion no estuvo nada mal y tus dibujos estan muy bien hechos.
Espero ver mas animaciones tuyas por aqui, de hecho te voy a marcar como autora favorita para ver que mas sacas.
Sigue trabajando!
cAtyviri responds:
vaya muchas gracias! tenia siglos que no entraba aqui ^^'
pero muchas gracias por el comentario ^^
Good animation
But it being only in Spanish really kills it for me. If you know how to make subtitles you should submit another one with English subtitles in it. I really respect that you put the authors comments in English, some people that submit a spanish only flash does everything in spanish, flash and the authors comments. You seem to be a good artist and I don't mind spanish audio as long as there are subtitles in English.
cAtyviri responds:
haha well since its being a long time i made this, i dont think i'll make subtitles for it, but im working on new stuff, and i'll put subtitles on them haha
Good artwork
No worries about the language. This was very good. Im sure it was also very informative- pardon my ignorance :)
cAtyviri responds:
hahahahaha thank you so much, i guess... well i dont really know if some one really learned to cook crepes with it, but i hope people who speak spanish can give it a use.
thank you for your comment, and sorry for the late response
