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sonic vs shadow episode 1

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plz don't blam me it took me forever to make and im only 13 years old so im just a nooby and i just got flash mx like a week ago. . . and if you do happen to blam it tell me WHY you blammed it i hate getting blammed and not knowing why.

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Ok heres some thyings you should try to fix.

1:The characters there are twitching.

2:You are making Shadow fight Sonic for no reason.

3:Try making it longer and use better spirtes for Sonic and Shadow.

So i give you a 4 for trying.

don't sweat it kid

i'm 18 and I couldn't do flash if I was paid. you can already do a lot better than me. keep trying and you'll get it eventually. maybe show it to your family and see what they think before you submit it in the future.

nice start

its a start. when you do sprites make sure you make that the individual sprites are lined up right. it is tedious work but it makes it look more clean cuz those sprites were moving too much for a standing motion. i suggest you look at some of the sprite tutorials on the internet before you submit again.

Sorry, but... you should try harder.

I mean, all the characters were twitching. You had a music off button, but not a music on button. Pause wasn't a hard stop, movie clips still moved. (And twitched.) Why can they spin-dash fly around? Why would Sonic's downward kick send Shadow flying up?Why did that Shadow close up have a uncut rectangle hovering over his shoulder? Why are they even fighting?

Hello.

Well, it's not great, I can tell you that. But since you are fairly new at this, I'd say keep up the work and one day you'll become a pro! But do try to get more variations on animation, other than using sprites. I think people might appreciate some good hand drawn animation too.

Just ask around, and I'm sure people would be willing to teach you a few things.

Keep it up!

masterflash554 responds:

ive tried using other things before sprites and it got blammed in five minutes. . .

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May 11, 2009
6:51 PM EDT