Great!
But the fight just halted at the end. More action needed!!!! but other than that, GREAT JOB!
Author Comments
UPDATE 5/10/09:
wow thanks for your reviews i cant believe i got such a good score i thought it wasnt that good,
but i might do a sequel but not goku and luffy but vegeta and sanji =D i think......i need your opinion
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Well its finally here the full length goku vs luffy movie
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Total Frames: 4280
FPS: 24
Length: 172 secs
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Flash CS3
Fireworks MX 2004
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Luffy-Grim and Alejo
Goku-Nightmare
(Jump! Ultimate Supertars)
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Animationspriter200
----------SPECIAL THANKS----------
me
you
darkzero ( he helped a little not on animation but on telling me how to do a certain thing i didnt know......=/)
and if you didnt like the winner then screw yourself and make your own =O
Ehh
Not bad, it looked like you got a little lazy on some parts tho
I don't know...
This animation, even with 8.4 of score, (I don't think it's like that anymore when I press the Submit Review! button, but well) wasn't that good, but still some things saved your score
Good things =
Really, I never watched a Goku vs Luffy animation, IDK how...
It had some good things in the animation itself, kinda decent coreography
Bad things =
Choosing the mains to fight is very clichéd
Using this material is really not good, everybody does, and I mean the Dragon Ball sounds for the punches and that, and the Naruto games' backgrounds, they should be in a DBZ place, or an OP place, but no, they are in Naruto's world for some reason, and also, Yuumon's special effects, it's like the must for the newbie, c'mon they aren't that good...
Kinda choppy, it ruined the coreography
Some detail would have been good in this animation, but it was really improvised, even when goku was smashed into the hole, when the cam goes to luffy and then goes back, OH, SURPRISE, THE HOLE IS AWAY D:
Also, you really randomly included any effect you had in your library, because even when they fuckin stand up or idk move, i hear a fucking punch...
Luffy learned Goku's abilty to fly? That isn't even possible
So well, try to read this without freaking out or whatever, and learn from it too, because the fact that you have good score doesn't make you a good animator, it will just increase your ego, for nothing, I hope this review is helpful and not considered just a criticizing bullshit by an asshole, when all the reviews you have are like Youtube comments, just the bullshit they want to say, the review space is to actually say what you think of the submission, try to help the author, and give some constructive criticism, and also make your questions, not like the dude who said Cool and then Cool again, how is that even useful? Only because of the 10, but well, if you follow my tips, I'm sure you will get to be really good, and not the typical flash starter who makes all the animations like DBZ, I know this had DBZ in it, but even like that, this was like a DBZ shit flash, not like DBZ itself, just like the typical DBZ shit attempt of animation, so well...
awesome
awesome animations i subscribed to you with two accounts
cool but short
it was awesome but it was too short... and can you tell me wher you got the luffy character!