Oh c'mon, you must've expected it to do a LITTLE well. :P Really nice animation, very stylish. There's a few tweaks I'd make to it, but that's just me. Good luck withfuture projects.
Nooo, I'm kidding, this animation ROCKS.
Some little problems because you don't deserve a perfect 10/10:
- The texts. The beginning is funny, but the whole thing doesn't seems to be volontary not-so-serious. Majuscules and dots, maybe ask to a writer to do better dialogs, keeping the freestyle. :)
- The art. Too simple in 2009, even if it is stickfight! See the "Castle" series in newgrounds to get exemples of actual stick movies. ;)
The Yoyo vs Katana idea is excellent. The only thing that annoys me is that is too short.
Maybe try to do it a bit longer, in another place, with decor destruction (columns, windows...), improve the camera, do different angles of view, eventually have stereo voices, and it will be perfect. ^^
5/5 because of the simple but excellent idea and general quality.
7/10 because you can improve a lot of things in your next work. :)
this battle was actually ruled to be a "two dimensional face-off" which means you can only use one camera angle (2-D angle) throughout the whole animation with just pure frame by frame action. But yeah I get what you're saying about the different angles and stuff and im actually working on that on my next battle! :D Thanks for the tips man, i'll use these to improve my next anim :)
It was good, but I didn't like the end.
very creative i havent seen a good stick fight in a while
It's just a stick figure fight, why is everyone so impressed by it?