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May 5, 2009 | 7:49 PM EDT

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This is a mess around with flash for a couple of days, i have only really just started to get to grips with stuff so as always any comments are always appreciated. Please let me know what you think and thank you x

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Save-A-SealSave-A-Seal

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

A bit too static. rough around the edges.

I saw a bit of potential here, but, to summarize my thoughts: a bit more animation, a bit more smoothly done would've been nice. Also, the roughness, specifically the driving scene, where you moved the image but white was seen around the edges. Certainly a good start.



ZaneAsylumZaneAsylum

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good graphics

I like the graphics. One suggestion, put a black layer underneath so white bits don't distract the viewer when you do your fades to black.



XxTurtleTommyxXXxTurtleTommyxX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice Serious Short

It was pretty well done for just messing around id love to see you doing one fore real.



ModularBluesModularBlues

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not too bad

Liked some of the still shots, esp. the one w/ the pills and phone. The motion when the guy stands up is a bit rough - maybe more frames? And at the end just add something like a replay button.