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This is a mess around with flash for a couple of days, i have only really just started to get to grips with stuff so as always any comments are always appreciated. Please let me know what you think and thank you x

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A bit too static. rough around the edges.

I saw a bit of potential here, but, to summarize my thoughts: a bit more animation, a bit more smoothly done would've been nice. Also, the roughness, specifically the driving scene, where you moved the image but white was seen around the edges. Certainly a good start.

Good graphics

I like the graphics. One suggestion, put a black layer underneath so white bits don't distract the viewer when you do your fades to black.

Nice Serious Short

It was pretty well done for just messing around id love to see you doing one fore real.

Not too bad

Liked some of the still shots, esp. the one w/ the pills and phone. The motion when the guy stands up is a bit rough - maybe more frames? And at the end just add something like a replay button.

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May 5, 2009
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