And yes little girl, he did just fart in your face
Definitely a pretty good movie with a nice level of humour for the most part. Plenty of the jokes may have been predictable and cheesy, but most of them still worked. The base of the idea wasn't particularly original, but I don't recall having seen a cigarette as a bad superhero before.
It was a shame about the low quality of the video, which was particularly noticeable during camera movement. Was this due to you editing it in a program other than Flash? If so it seems a shame, since you surely could have at least used the trial version of Flash to edit it.
Some of the lines were difficult to understand due to the voices being put on being far too strong. I'd suggest subtitles or making sure that all the lines could easily be understood. The sound volume of the audio in the end credits was at a much higher volume than the rest of the flash and once the credits stopped rolling you were left with an extremely dark still from one of the scenes with black lines over it. It would have been nice if it had gone back to the preloader screen with the play button instead.
I didn't fully understand the jokes regarding the colleges. I could work out the point of the joke, but of the colleges mentioned I had only heard of Harvard. Obviously this flash was aimed more at American viewers than overseas ones. Tobacco Man's coughing fit went on for far too long, which made it become a pain to watch. You could have made this much shorter, still got the point across and would have ended up being much funnier in the process. I also felt that the scene with Cindy went on for too long, with it taking up the bulk of the movie. It would have been nice to have seen this time spent elsewhere on a wider variety of jokes.
finaly a superhero that has earned my respect.
After a long day of giving people cancer by second hand smoke he justify's it .
Yup, that's original ! That was funny. Good work !
Who didnt love that?
That was pretty funy, make beerman and weedmn next.