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Paper Asteroids -Homework

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This is a game I created a while back, it isn't finished as this game has so much potential to it. I uploaded it so I can get your views on whether I should carry on with this and upload it when it's completely finished or to scrap it.

*GLITCH* .. End score doesn't pick up.

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LOL plagerism

my mate just linked me to this, I made almost exactly the same game in 2006
see here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /306908

I like yours though and you obviously did make it yourself, regardless of were you got the idea from.

hope you keep at it

--Smith

well..

for an unfinished game this is pretty polished. the visuals were very well made and the basic game mechanics worked smoothly.

things that should be improved :
background loop - far too short, kept seeing the same 2+2=4 thing every 2 seconds.. irritated my eyes. needs to be longer and/or better randomized.
music loop as was stated before me was a bit on the short side as well.
power ups, raising difficulty level, boss fights etc.. the basic mechanic is fine but will not keep me entertained for very long..
maybe this was intentional but it seems that when an asteroid hit my ship if I moved swiftly away I received almost no damage and if I stayed with the asteroid for the duration of the explosion animation I received a lot of damage. the way I see it it should be standard damage per hitting an asteroid. but that one may be just my point of view.
scoring system - obviously.
that about it. :) loved the visual premise and the feel of the game. definitely worth additional work.

Basic, nice,

But the design scheme has some issues. Milky white paper didn't fit with the other graphics. A small change with that couldn't hurt.

Pretty good

The game was creative and a lot of fun
But it just kinda looped itself over and over again
Maybe add some levels and boss fights?
Possibly a story?
All in all, it was really fun game and the animation was really well done
I especially liked the doodles in the background.
9/10

AmyMation responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write a review. A 9 for a BETA of this game is VERY generous. I will take account what you said.

I say go for it!

You're right, this definitely has a lot of potential. Smooth framerate, good drawings, and appropriate background music. Only suggestions would be add a little more length to the looping background and maybe add something that scrolls across the top for bonus points like in the old asteroid games. Nice job! :D

AmyMation responds:

Thanks for the review! :D

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May 2, 2009
1:12 PM EDT