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NinjaFight: Who Will Win?

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Who will win, Red or White? A little stick animation i worked on for about 11 hours. this started as a drawing in my notebook and I now put it to work in a flash. hope you enjoy!!!

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pretty good.

try making it longer lol
and if you need sound effects check my profile out! theres plenty

swishcheese responds:

Thanks alot ive been looking for some good sounds effects. ill be sure to get em. and Thanks for the review

not too shabby.

hey I liked it and all. I mean, ninjas are cool and such. yes, it was a bit short and maybe not as smooth as most people would have liked, but still a good effort. Maybe one or two suggestions on my part:
**make the weapons more noticeable**
I could kinda tell what was a shuriken at the beginning but after that I wasn't sure what the other stuff was. I'd either make the weapons bigger or more detailed.
**make the fighting better and perhaps more varied**
Other than just making the animation more smooth and making it longer I'd also like to see a bit more of a ninja fight. throw in some staffs, or smoke bombs or some terrain so that they're not just bouncing off the walls.

Other than that, just keep at it. I'm sure you can turn out some good stuff if you try :)

swishcheese responds:

Thanks a lot for the advice, it will be useful, and thanks for the review

pretty cool

That was actually pretty cool

it needs to be a bit longer hence my 7/10

would be cool if the animations were a little better done

but overall if it was longer it would have amused me very much

But i love stick animations :p

swishcheese responds:

Thanks yeah i probablly shouldve made it a little longer. Thanks for the review

Good.. good

I think you were trying to make it slow-mo when they fought but it looked more like they were trapped in glue. But I'm assuming this was a work to get more improvement so I think you did a fine job! 2/5 and a 5/10 for the work, because flash can be hard :D.

swishcheese responds:

Thanks. yeah the slow motion wasnt that smooth, and i did learn some things from this animation. thanks for the vote and review

aite

dat was entertaining, animation not to smooth but still good
wasnt expecting dat one to win though

swishcheese responds:

haha it was a nice guess though. thanks for the review

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3.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 27, 2009
6:57 PM EDT