Good Flash
Good animation, voice overs would have been appreciated but the sounds used were very funny indeed! As for the educational value, I think the battle should have been named lol Other than that it was great.
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Well, the ceremony was last night and i got the commended award, that got me a nice certificate and an amazon voucher for £20
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The people who run the competition have contacted me and i have been told that i have been nominated for an award!!!
I have to attend a ceremony on the 26th to see if i've won. I'll probably write up what happens here after the ceremony. ^^
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This is my second proper flash movie. I made it for a competition (animation 09), and basically what I had to do is make a one minute movie about anything I've been taught in school. Its going to be entered in the Ks3 category which is for ages 11-13. Constructive critisism would be appericated, because I want to improve it before the deadline (1st may).
Thanks!
Some relatively simple things you could do...
To add a little sound at the very beginning, you could put in the sound from gilligan's island when it returned from commercial. And at the end you could add a triumphant song (i.e. "We are the Champions")
Pretty good for your age though.
AdamTheBigGoof responds:
thanks, some good ideas there
Animation 09'
I was going to enter that too- but unfornatly i got tied down with work, Sixth Form and all that ;) i didn't do too well with my results so i won't finsh for 1st may..
Here comes the critism-
-They require that it is in some way related to the nation school curriclum, and im not sure if that was- i know its in a way educational (that battle did kinda happen) but if you want my advice it would be to make it a bit more school-like.
However i know how it hard it is because all my ideas lacked School Curriculum-ness too, but good luck buddy, its a great compition, and im defonatly entering next year!
It was very funny.
AdamTheBigGoof responds:
Yh, I agree. I guess this time I had just thought of something on the national curriculum that would make a decent flash movie. Next time I'll definitely focus on making it more educational.
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HEY! I'M SPANISH! THIS WAS AN OFFENSE TO MY NATION!
just kidding. Good job for such a young age. Keep up the job and you'll become a pretty good.
AdamTheBigGoof responds:
lol Thanks
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lol spanish constipation FIIREE!!!!!, good animation keep it up.
p.s. check out my Fading Memories animation