Drawn well...
but thats about it.
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Animation number 2.
WARNING:FLASHING LIGHTS, DO NOT WATCH IF YOU ARE EPILEPTIC
[edit] Original title: Assisted Suicide Anticipation
24 Frames per second.
Inspired by catoblepas.
One weekend.
Naked City.
14 seconds.
Review it, tear it apart :D Criticism please!
Enjoys
EmptyOrange responds:
Thank you, seeing as the only part that I contributed to was the drawing. The song was chosen because it was 14 seconds and had distinct changes in it. On top of that it was all purely experimental. By the way, it has a story line you probably didn't catch. Which is probably why it was given a four. Thank you for your helpful review.
wow
I'm glad you sent me that message because that was actually quite interesting. If you actually use your skills for something that makes sense you can do great things! Refine the technique, make an actual story, and you can definitely do something great!
Awesome, but too short
This piece was looking to shape up really nicely and then it ended, which was the major let down if I'm totally honest with you. I think that the animation style was neat, despite the flashing imagery, which might be detrimental to epileptics watching.
I'd love to see you have a go at a piece or two with some plot line behind it, as your animating skills are great, but when they are given a direction to proceed in, I'm sure that they will set the place alight.
Certainly someone to keep a watch out for when the Writers portal is released. I've got soem flash scripts made, but I'm not sure that they would interest you, doing music videos.
[Review Request Club]
EmptyOrange responds:
Thanks for reminding me about the flashing, I put a warning up there now. The shortness of the flash was determined by the song of choice, but ultimately the main focus was to get some more practice.
I am planning on making flash other then music videos but for now this is doing it for me :D I will keep an eye out for your work!
Thank you for the review it is always appreciated
yea uh allright
i dont wanna condemn it but its a little too short
EmptyOrange responds:
Short, straight, to the point!
ahhh
if that was longer i would have gave it a ten
( i fived it tho)
EmptyOrange responds:
My first animations are currently my learning curve :)
Thank you for the review!
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3.17 / 5.00
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