i LIKED it
i think this was pretty good, I dont think its racist atall, dont understand y u apologize for racism tho...
Author Comments
Just a short flash loop I made this morning with PowerPoint.
I converted it with iSpring Pro 4.
It's not meant to be racist and I don't mean to offend people from any kind of race.
This flash tells exactly my interpretation of life, death, and the small line that seperates them, but also that you can be whatever you want to be, as long as you believe in yourself.
RazorShader responds:
Thanks. About the racism thingy; you never can be careful enough ;D
Short but good
Perhaps you do not use Flash?
Wow! It's good to be in powerpoint, a lot, but people down here don't understand, I understand that you can do a good work in powerpoint.
I liked it, but could be better, try with more music?
Oh and sorry for my bad english... heh
RazorShader responds:
Well it's more that I couldn't find appropriate music for this, but I'm glad you enjoyed.
hmmm
it wasnt that bad. I mean it may have been a short loop but the animation was really simple and smooth.
RazorShader responds:
I definitely have to agree with you. Thanks a lot! :)
fail
the hand is pritty much the only thing that moves. no audio. poor art.
...You want constructive critism? stop. just stop makeing flash. save your self, and us, the time.
RazorShader responds:
Fail.
The short sentences are pretty much the only ones without spelling mistakes or messed up grammar.
If I might give you a hint... Stop. Just stop reviewing. Save yourself and Newgrounds the crappy spelling and use your time to get some decent education.
O, and "stop makeing flash" isn't very constructive at all. It has another spelling mistake in it, though.
And the hands (yes, he has two, you would see that too, if you could count), aren't the only things moving. If you would have actually watched, you would have seen that the guy has some facial expressions as well. But hey, someone with not even a picture on his user page shouldn't complain about poor art :)
yeah no
Audio. oh man audio. you exprct us to love moving pictures on its own.
your comments dont relate to the genre.
and boy did it waste my life writing this.
-"HTML"
RazorShader responds:
Well-o-well-o-well....what genre should I put it by then? I just say what's my interpretation of what I think. Comedy is just a way to show all these things in a funny way.
It doesn't matter if someone else calls you a loser and laughs at you, because you can make your life no matter what that one person may think of you. The life/death-thing goes deeper, but if you even didn't see the believe-in-yourself stuff, you don't even stand a chance understanding the subtle lines between life and death. As you say, you "never go [in]between".
If you don't give helpful advise, you're not just wasting your life typing that, but also mine reading it.
Your comments don't relate to the so-called "constructive criticism", nor to my movie. I don't see any "moving pictures". It's an animation, not a slideshow.
And you don't always need audio to transfer the message you want to share.
But unfortunately not everybody gets that.
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