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Mouse Target

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Apr 26, 2009 | 2:48 PM EDT

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This is a flash I made just to practice and help increase my skills. There isn't much of a plot because it IS for practice. I'd like reviews so I could know how to make it better.

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LPGzLPGz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Practice more.

It was nice. The art was good, you can draw very nicely, but you need to improve the animation. Besides that, it was a very nice cartoon. Just practice more.



Chelo-kunChelo-kun

Rated 4 / 5 stars

A cool splash of old school

A little bit of good old "Tom and Jerry" fun. The animation is a little rough and art is crude. But that can be fixed with practice. I have to applaud to you for the frame-by-frame, the acting, anticipation and reaction to other's actions. Bravo!


Toba122 responds:

It looks so ruff because my graphic tablets all jittery and malfunctional. Thanks for the review!


cheshirecat1582cheshirecat1582

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hehe

I like it!! Your sound effects matched up really well! And you can draw really well also!!! Nice little practice piece! Wish I could animate like that... I mean drawing them frame by frame... thats allot of work!



ntndskntndsk

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Haha

Not bad. It was kind of like a Tom and Jerry thing, just with two mice. Good job on this.



LibrisLibris

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Choppy but Fun

The animation was surprisingly fun - especially when the mouse in the blue sweater was jumping about and dodging. However, the very rough background made it difficult to enjoy because I was too busy trying to figure out where they were, and the sense of size was a little off.