Keep working at it
You fixed a problem I had when I first watched this, that the first part of the film would play over the rest of it after about 15 - 20 seconds. But now I've seen the whole thing I'm not sure it was worth waiting for, due to the lack of a real story (apart from the fact it's called "searching for a new moon") the flash has to be really impressive in the graphics, which it's not. Also what was that thing he was sucked into? Judging by the fact he was sucked into it my guess would be a black hole, but black holes are........ black. Don't get me wrong, it wasn't awful but I'd guess the score would settle at around 2.8/5 I wouldn't expect it to get much above 3.
Graphics - 2/5
Story - 1/5
Originality - 3.5/5 (haven't seen too many videos of a big blue bird adventuring into space before)
Music - 3/5
Giving a black hole colours - 1/5
Overall - 2.5/5