This is my first flash submission, I know the music gets a little off, and I'm sorry about that. But once again, it's my first flash. Enjoy!
(1) I never seen it, so sorry for that, and I've never ready newspapers.
(2) I'd like only constructive reviews, not ones simply telling me I'm crap, if your one of those, gtfo.
(3) People from different movies can work together, so why not games -.-
I'll try to give you some constructive advice.
I could see this being funny if each screen didnt stay on the screen for 20 seconds and maybe if you had a funny voice doing the advertising too. Maybe like this: "First it was Guitar Hero, now it's PIANO hero! It only has 65 buttons you have to memorise, so its easy to pick up and play!" Sorry for the low score but it wasn't really that funny to me. Keep trying though!
Thanks!
I'm gonna get Adobe Audition, and that should help with the voicing! And Score, I don't care about. It's just when people put, "Wow... You suck"
Well at least it didn't get blamed.
It has potential. Just keep working on it BUT the most important part is stay fucking positive! I know it's fucking cliché but if you don't it will reflect your work and that will get you more bad reviews. Good luck in the future - V65
Thx, I know to stay positive. ;)
And I'll probrably come back and fix it sometime.
Thanks for your CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
it should be a game
i agree with billowillo you should make it a game id play it
I'm sorry, kiddo.
I'm not gonna be nice simply because it was your first flash animation. If you aren't good yet, then work on your skills until you are.
This doesn't have the kind of quality that warrants any space on the web.
Then you obviously haven't looked around at some of the submissions here, or only get on every 5 months when a new Uber Awesome Flash comes out. Not everyone has the time to dedicate to making a flash. I have a life to live and money to make. If you feel that way, good for you, but I'm not going to put your comment down in my book.
should make it into a game
id love to see that happen. like use the whole home row on your keyboard to play a piano hero game. =D
