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The voices were a little distorted from the microphone, but it was okay overall. The animation was decent and the plot was okay. I think most people are giving you a low score because of the audio. Oh, and sometimes the audio would jump a little farther ahead of the dialog text, but that's okay.

Anyway, not bad. Keep it up.

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The sound did not really go with the flash... Keep trying.

Takes too long to start

I don't like looking at a black screen while music i don't enjoy is playing.