good..

for your fdirst animation it was good...

Hey buddy!

Hey! Glade you finally put something up and it awesome for a first time animation. 6 out of 10 for obvious reason. But keep it up! Can't wait to see more.

-Cam

well...

Spend more time to make it look better! voices were ok. I give you 3/5 cus it was your first animation ^^ GL with making animations! and someday you will become godlike! (like mindchamber...)

Best first animation!

If this really was your first flash. then way to go bro. I think its one of the best flash submission I've ever seen from a firsttimer.
Usually peoples 1st flash is without sound... the the soundeffects in your movie safes the story. (even thought they are all copies)
of course its not like the other movies you see here on newgrounds, but again... for a firsttimer, then its close to epic :D

I'm sorry, but...

Did you make this from Movie Maker or something? I mean, the animation wasn't that good, and the storyline was too simple. Sorry, try again.