Well
Story line is brilliant - graphic is not so, but animation good.
Make more and your movies will become better ^_^
Author Comments
This was an art project I had to do for my English class. We had to make an art piece about anything we want in any medium, and then had to write 7-9 page research paper on your own art piece. I made the "smart" choice is doing an animation. What some peoples projects took them an hour mine took about a weeks and a half of work spending 3-4 hours a day working.
Here is what I turned in. You might notice some lip syncing off or completely left out that because i wasn't able to get it all done by the dead line. (and I'm to exhausted to now)
Otto the Caterpillar is a story about a small caterpillar going on a BIG adventure to get to the girl of his dreams who lives in the tree down the street. He faces many dangers on his journey, but fortunately Otto got his best friend Joe an bird unable to fly.
Please enjoy Otto the Caterpillar
-James Wolfington
I really liked it
Although sometimes the characters didn't talk with the audio, i thought it was good.
It was really simple, and the drawing wasn't that good, but overall, good job.
Dude that was weird
Some parts are well drawned like the beggining scenarios , and other parts sucks real bad on drawing. I liked the story very much , minus the end ... you should have showed her transformation into butterfly , it just went too fast to the end.
If u hade made all grafics the same , it would have been an awesome flash , try improve that on the future.
sundaycomics responds:
i was working with time restraints so in order to get it in on time i had to make a few sacrifices.
great job!!!
Loved the story and the animation while simple was very impressive!!!
Would like to see more of your work!
Surprisingly good
i wasn't expecting that
pretty good story line (tho it was a bit corny)
good graphics
bonus points for the frogger part
i liked it alot
work on the grapics abit
thats all i can say
how did you do on the project?