first work? better than most!
Thats pretty awesome for a first try....i mean like compared to some peoples first stuff this like awful, and considering the fact ive never tried to do flash ill give you a nice score of a 4/5. :D
Was better than my first stuff...
Its a nice little loop i can imagine going on at a kiosk or presentation or something.
The style is good and drawings are good too.
I suggest you learn how to add sounds and stuff, theres probably some tutorials lying around somewhere on the portal and check out www.findsounds.com for sound effects.
Also for improvement on the drawings - i noticed shading in some shots, the best stuff on the portal tends to work around lighting nicely, so think about shading realisticly and perhaps add more next time.
Overall though its amazing for a newbie and i suggest you keep at it because i can spot some potential for perhaps a good little cartoon series or something.
Good Luck =)
Love the simplicity of the graphics and animation, and awesome for your first time.
Better than I was. Come to think of it, I'm not very good at flash still, lol, nice animation.
The animation is nice and the idead cute, and its not that short! If you carry on improving then youll do great!
Thank you, I'll definitely do what I can to continue with Flash and improving. Glad you liked the idea :)
It was short and cute, but it was a good job.
Thanks, I wish I was able to polish it up more but it's probably better to focus on my next project. I'll try to make it better (and longer?) than this one.