that some crazzy bee
lol i love that the bee exploded XD
Author Comments
I made this because i was bored and thought it would be funny, this is my first flash MOVIE so go easy on comments and helpful comments on future flashes are appreciated.
A brilliant start
This was really good for somebody's first Flash.
Although the animation wasn't brilliant, your timing along to the music, the cutely-drawn bee and the flower worked to make the bee's mass-explosion freakin' hilarious.
Whilst it's not the best, it does have the basics all Flashes should be able to provide - Entertainment, however brief.
Overall, great job!
Recommend that next time, you work on the backgrounds, and possibly on the explosion detail.
... Woah I sound over-professional...
ookpaia responds:
yes, you do sound profesional, your comment helps a lot. thanks man =D
cute
The animation style is charming, it comes off as cutesy wootsy. I like it, but really, ya coulda went somewhere with it other than spontaneous combustion.
Art : 10
Concept : 5
7'd
ookpaia responds:
I cant believe you rated me 10 on the art. i guess i've found my own personal style (i dont mean the spontanious combustion) Thanks a lot! =)
Haha, nice.
Random, just a bit, but that's okay.
Good job. You had good sound quality, a good (but predictable) song, and some pretty nice animations.
Work on the explosions though. I know, they're difficult. But don't just loop the same explosion over and over, try to make more than one (two would still be better).
Other than that, nice job!
ookpaia responds:
Not bad comments for my first actual movies (not counting my shamful games =P)
poor bee
Did that bee just explode???? why???? nice style tho.
ookpaia responds:
There's no real reason for it exploding, i guess it overheated.
