I liked it very much, with its humour it reminded me of the discworld novels
Oh my word, that's brilliant praise! Thank you so much!
Superb and nicely done
I like the way the story was told
Beautiful grammar with plenty of humor
Lastly, the narrative was nice
Glad you liked it; those are some lovely comments! Thank you very much!
We need more of these!!
A true work of art to say the least!
Wonderful, different, and funny as hell, I hope to see more of your work soon.
Thank you very much, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it!
I'll be sure to keep you posted as soon as the next big project is in motion.
"fear gripped me like a stairmaster,"
sweet, more coming?
In the near future. I think this particular story has realised most of its potential, but we'll definitely move on to bigger and better projects! Stay tuned!