It's so good...
... I cant even understand it.
Haha, oh dear! I knew this would happen if I took the Dictionary.com link out of my original Author Comments!
If there are any words you want to check out, be sure to use Dictionary.com which should sort out most of your worries (although you may want to look up "narcoleptic" rather than "narcoleptically"). Also some of the expressions should be pretty easy to Google.
that was a very great story. I've never seen or heard a story like that. for that you get a perfect score... very imaginative.
This is incrible, this flash deserves to be at the top of the ranks. Ever taught to start a web business of flashbooks? From what I just saw, I'd sign up as a client right away!
I enjoyed everything about it. The author can make a good story teller! The choice or words had my mind racing and churning with imagination and imagery.
If a book was put out to stores. Id certainly purchase such a master piece. The story had everything a story needed to impress all branches of personality. From the serious to the ones wanting a good laugh. You probably impressed them all. Good work to you and everyone who helped you make this.
5/5 10/10 and goodnight!