Another egoraptor clone...
Just what we need...
So, anyway: The story was terrible. I was confused and 50% of the time, the audio was too blurry to make out.
I'd like to say the art was decent, if every other NG portal Submission didn't look identical.
The Animation used a simple movement technique popular with '70's-'80's animation. You hold for so many frames, distracting the audience with secondary animation. (Speaking of which is really lacking)
The Lip-syncing was okay, but the voices were too close together -- get a second actor -- and, as I mentioned before, blurry. Find a better place to record.
yay my first bad review on newgrounds!... or the internet for that matter! Oh god, I'd just like to thank all of my frineds, family... my grandmother who couldn't be here today. Jesus, if he's listening seems like he's been pretty busy lately. Anyone else who made this possible. I love you all!
the kitty was awesome.
It really started to grow on me half way through.
Some of the sound effects block out the character's voice, and there was only music during the credits. However it did have funny elements to it and shows potential. Try to make future submissions longer.
Credits are supposed to be boring bud. I shall try my best to make them longer than 40 seconds.
awsome this could be made to a series
I was plannin' on it. Question is where to go now.
THe animation was limited, and the humour didnt do much. Try to work more on the next one.