too slow
important things that you can see with madness is that it always has constant motion. nobody is just standing around doing nothing, when the protagonist is in the room. even the victims not being shot at must have a reaction to, the main character, the death of others, sounds and when they fire. later in the flash that became noticable, but only slightly. every character needs to have a strong emotion to ones self. Sometimes you can even know what the character feel emotionally. thats how deep you have to get in with you flashes.
6/10::: could have been better