Nice to see something original for a chance.
It seems kind of iteresting...
..but it's difficult for me to follow the whole thing without any subtitles. It would be very nice of you to put them.
Otherwise, the animation was nice, nothing too awesome or even colorful, but B/N was more than appropiate to discribe this kind of people and it ran smoothly. The music gave good ambience without getting more protagonism than the voice at any moment. Your voice was also nice and all, but it was just hard to follow for me at some parts.
Overall, very good, but without the subtitles I just can't get all the juice out of it.
will do for future(subtitles), i know what you mean, i am not super articulate at times
It's an excellent fable-type story, however...
I can't exactly grab a hold of the metaphor in my mind. I can't exactly envision what the invisibles are in reality. Maybe I've just never met one, or maybe they're not supposed to stand for anything at all.
Well...that was just beautiful,sometimes sad,but I really enjoyed it!
oh my god, that was, so, poetic! it was BEAUTIFUL!