I love the storyline, but wish there was a little more of a solution if you know what i mean. It just seemed like you didn't know how to end it. Overall I enjoyed it and cant wait for more.
Such a low score?
This was a perfect example of fantastic story telling. Loved everything about this. 5/5, 10/10!
Seemed a bit silly at first but this is a true artistical piece of work!
This was very good
I was not quite sure what I was going to see when i opened this flash video, but the story is very unique and the art is not bad at all. You kept my attention the whole way around. Keep making videos :)
I like this animation!
sometimes it sounds like you can hear the narrator reading, but nevertheless very original story!
Of course I was reading, are you meaning it sounded ineffectual? I am confused. Thanks for the compliment though.