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Apr 18, 2009 | 4:00 PM EDT

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I'm going to say this now,
this video has no music, no sounds, and the text went wonky on me.

I couldnt find a decent song for this, and when I was done (thinking my text would help)
it didnt, so forgive me for such a crap video, but I 'll tell the story here:

It's about a girl (Colette) who has a huge crush on the guy( Peter) infront of her, during class. The guy with red/orange hair( Simon) is her close friend but he has a crush on her.
The next day she's getting ready to confront the guy she has a crush on until she gets a call.
Later that day, she sees him and tell him " thank you for coming" and he tells her no problem.
She then hands him a letter but he then tells her she to guly, in shame she falls down to her knees, when someone comes behind her. It's Simon! He then hands her a note, and in glee, she jumps on him, then it's the end.

Towards the end, it goes really fast, I think it cause I use the ending on my PC at home while I started it originally on the Macs at school. Plus I finished it the day before it was due.

Sorry for major inconvients.

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Healingvisioner1Healingvisioner1

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Would've been great...

The animation quality was pretty good, most of it was good enough to give high marks. It was not, however, good enough to hold the film up by itself. The sound is half of the experience (hence half the score). Without the sound, the work feels unfinished, and it isn't very fun to watch. I'd suggest reposting it at least with some nice background music (The newgrounds audio portal is filled with all kinds of music, and most people are really good about letting you use it for a film so long as you ask permission first. Once again, it was good, but simple laziness hinders it a lot. Either way, don't stop animating, you definitely got talent ^_^



C00L007C00L007

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hey)

You need more work) I like your cartoon) 10/10 and 5/5... You draws cool ;)



ManlyMan97ManlyMan97

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Okay

The drawing was pretty good and animation satisfactory. For some reason, the text sometimes didn't all appear in the bubbles. Also, you need a preloader so it doesn't loop.


zimie responds:

I was going to use one of the preloaders from here, but at the time I was grounded and my school has it block.


kcchampskcchamps

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

maybe,,,,,,,,,,,,,

maybey if there was some sound it would have been prety good



KarttiboneKarttibone

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

sweet

Your artwork really is great. You said it. Add a song and make the text more visible. Next time if you do that it will be a 10/10 : 5/5