Would've been great...

The animation quality was pretty good, most of it was good enough to give high marks. It was not, however, good enough to hold the film up by itself. The sound is half of the experience (hence half the score). Without the sound, the work feels unfinished, and it isn't very fun to watch. I'd suggest reposting it at least with some nice background music (The newgrounds audio portal is filled with all kinds of music, and most people are really good about letting you use it for a film so long as you ask permission first. Once again, it was good, but simple laziness hinders it a lot. Either way, don't stop animating, you definitely got talent ^_^

Okay

The drawing was pretty good and animation satisfactory. For some reason, the text sometimes didn't all appear in the bubbles. Also, you need a preloader so it doesn't loop.

maybe,,,,,,,,,,,,,

maybey if there was some sound it would have been prety good

sweet

Your artwork really is great. You said it. Add a song and make the text more visible. Next time if you do that it will be a 10/10 : 5/5

nice ... funny

what you need to do still is sound a the speech bubbles.

P.S. slow some of the movie down a bit i cant read most of it but....
GREAT