Well A Good Starting Point
If you watch almost any animator's first movie, it won't be perfect, your art is alright, you seem to have a good style you just need to work more on detail and the style's execution. One thing however, is you need voices I noticed in a review below your repsonse said you couldn't figure out where to put the sounds. If you still need help with that I can help, just say so in the response. And oter than that just keep working on flash!