I like it!
If it had sound it would have made me laugh :P
Author Comments
An Original Frame by Frame Flash Animation
This is the first stage of a 20 sec. animation Exercise, There is no sound yet, but i will release a newer version with sound after i get feedback on the animation and story from all you guys. Hope You enjoy it. and any feedback will be appreciated Thanks.
An okay start
While as usual I see alot of effort put into this, but anatomy seems to be a big issue, along with perspective. When he bends over to help her up he seems deformed, and their poses/limbs are very spaghetti like. This project seems very ambitious and while I like encouraging that and am glad to see you've tried pretty hard to make something decent, maybe you should practice some basic animation first and try to keep the characters looking the same.
AndreaC responds:
thanks for feedback. looking foward to revising it.
Not bad.
Music would have made it better, though.
Nice frame by frame.
I felt sorry for the guy in the video, though.
The artwork was good, but you will get a higher score when you add sound.