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Link is now forced to work at the distribution of motor vehicles...
I enjoyed this and your anamitation wasent to bad
1 for effort...
Assuming any effort actually went into that. You're animation was sub-par, and needs much improvement. The worst part however was the voice. I must've said this to 1/2 a dozen others, if you're using those cheap-ass PC mics; don't put your mouth so close to the damn thing when recording, it makes it sound terrible. Well worse then it would anyway... Also for Link's voice, you may consider trying to find actual voice clips instead. Just a thought.
room for improvement
animations was poor, the sound was 10 times worse tho. It sounds like you used on of those shitty microphones that you used to get free with your computer like back in the 90's. The animation really, really needs alot more work as well. It looks like you did it in MS paint and its clear that you put very little effort into it. You may have been able to pull off your comedy writitng alot better when you can actually hear what they are saying. Other than that i really wouldnt know what to say about the comedy writing since i didnt hear shit. But it doesnt take good sound to realize that the voice acting was bad and that you borrowed a line from South Park to use for the manager. You just really need to do work next time.
The concept was good, but the character quality to me was sub-par. The voice quality was even worse, and the fact that you racially sterotyped the man and Pikachi as if they were of Asian decent and could no say "L"s properly. I say Boo.
I liked it!
Cool and funny, only thing is you should get a new mic. cuz it kind of sounds bad but its still funny =]
Subpar is haunted by an evil spirit on Halloween night!
A short animation about some glorious ice creams
Luigi Beware, You're in for a Scare...!
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